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Solitude... by ~haluku:iconhaluku:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Sonnet


Solitude…

I hear…my echo
I see…my shadow
I feel…the empty air
I taste…solitude

Slowly, it rises and covers my conscience
Slowly, it swallows my very existence
Slowly, it takes away my every expression
Slowly, it kills my very soul


My feet, stand alone, weak and frail
My hands, claps together…one prayer
My eyes, shut together…can not take what I see
My mind and heart, close…no longer embracing the world

My heart sank deep into the sea
My heart broken into shards of un-mendable crystals
My heart ache for a warmth feeling beside me
My heart sang a song of solitude…slowly, slowly, slowly

A song… that makes the night shiver
A song… that makes the beasts howl
A song… that reminisce depressing memories
A song… of Solitude

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Author's Comments

Another poetry I decided to post!
Thank you guys for the nice...really nice comment on the other one!
Thanks allot!
I really wish to get more like that! makes my heart all warm inside...so i won't have to feel...lonely lol
Got the inspiration from Math class ^^

ENJOY!

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~Ishtaru-Wendy May 8, 2008, 6:15:56 PM
:iconishtaruplz::cool

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Death Doll Maker
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~Show-No-Mercy-666 May 8, 2008, 6:19:59 PM
Pretty cool poem, chick
Though unmendable crystals would suit it better than unrepairable
Cool poem nonetheless
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~haluku May 8, 2008, 6:22:38 PM
^^ thank you very much!

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If only our hearts shaped like star fish...so it can regenerate parts once broken.
-by: i forgot

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconishtaru-wendy:
~Ishtaru-Wendy May 8, 2008, 6:26:15 PM
your welcome

:iconishtaruplz:
:iconstickmandancingplz:

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Death Doll Maker
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~haluku May 8, 2008, 6:28:36 PM
np! thank you and lol...that looks funny! :D
cool!

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If only our hearts shaped like star fish...so it can regenerate parts once broken.
-by: i forgot

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconhaluku:
~haluku May 8, 2008, 6:30:04 PM
^^%
thanks I'll keep that in mind! i was bored as hell in math class so i came up with this...and my firiend was pulling on my hair
'nyways~ thanks for the comment!

^^ i'll keep it in mi heart :P

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If only our hearts shaped like star fish...so it can regenerate parts once broken.
-by: i forgot

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconishtaru-wendy:
~Ishtaru-Wendy May 8, 2008, 6:33:35 PM
thanks :iconishtaruplz: is created by me

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Death Doll Maker
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~Show-No-Mercy-666 May 8, 2008, 6:34:00 PM
Yeah, no prob
I get bored in math class to and start drawing stuff
:iconhaluku:
~haluku May 8, 2008, 6:40:05 PM
cool awesome! looks great stunning! ok help me here! im running outa words lol
^^%

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If only our hearts shaped like star fish...so it can regenerate parts once broken.
-by: i forgot

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature.
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